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Pinkieshenanigans! by Yooyfull

:icontwianddashforever:
its good and all but i dont particularly like the puddles for the tears... also if you added a background maybe it would make it look better, also if you want to make it look like a game or program of some sort you should also add a few tool bars to get the feel, other then that it was a good peace of art and id love to see more like this, also you really caught the side of pinkie that most seem to completely pass, its like im actually watching this happen in the show, or your really interacting with pinkie!
all in all, its a good work just needs a little adjustments ya know? :P hope i helped!!! :D
~ TwiandDashforever <3
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soranetame Mar 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I do agree with the puddles.. they do look a tad bit round... but heck... what have I say to you about it... I have no expirience, and I am worth a pile of crap in this subject...
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TwiandDashForever Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol maybe if you practiced more you'll be great at it :D (heck to tell you the truth i would have never been able to do that XD)
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soranetame Mar 23, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Meh... i don't do animations at all...
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TwiandDashForever Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol (neathier do i :P )
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:iconsoranetame:
soranetame Mar 23, 2013  Student Digital Artist
: p
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TwiandDashForever Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol
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soranetame Mar 23, 2013  Student Digital Artist
^^
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AgentQwilfish Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
There's one critical thing you forgot to comment on when writing a critique for an animation.
And that's the actual animation!
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TwiandDashForever Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
eh it was my first try so lol XD
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Yooyfull Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for taking your time writing a critique and sorry for the slow delay (DA is bad at giving me a notice, or I'm just bad at noticing it >.<)
I know that backgrounds are important but I'm just bad at making them so I tend to avoid it, and I didn't see a BG fitting for this in particular because I wanted it to have the feeling of a working-area from the animation software that I use.
The tears are bad and I should feel bad :(
I'm glad you felt that there was some feeling of interaction with our partypony!
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